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Anonymous commented at 2014-11-29 15:14:40 » #1643779
Seems a little too Mary sueish to me. "Sacred beings, Air goddesses, high intelligence, power, and wisdom". They dont kidnap men, they "seduce him until they like them." Seems like they were trying really hard to make them sound like they're perfect. Plus, the thing with having children of different species- that's literally impossible, if we're going by the rules kenkou cross set with the MGE Universe. Monster girls always give birth to the same race. As for the girl herself, the art isn't that bad, but the two sets of wings feel like over kill. Overall, 4/10, not very believable.
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Seems a little too Mary sueish to me. "Sacred beings, Air goddesses, high intelligence, power, and wisdom". They dont kidnap men, they "seduce him until they like them." Seems like they were trying really hard to make them sound like they're perfect. Plus, the thing with having children of different species- that's literally impossible, if we're going by the rules kenkou cross set with the MGE Universe. Monster girls always give birth to the same race. As for the girl herself, the art isn't that bad, but the two sets of wings feel like over kill. Overall, 4/10, not very believable.
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MonsterButler commented at 2014-11-30 06:06:12 » #1644101
While I agree that it does seem very Mary Sue-esque, there IS one monster girl in the encyclopedia who does give birth to other monsters, and those are the Echidnas, which are based on the old legend of the origin of monsters anyways.
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While I agree that it does seem very Mary Sue-esque, there IS one monster girl in the encyclopedia who does give birth to other monsters, and those are the Echidnas, which are based on the old legend of the origin of monsters anyways.
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