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asia_catdog_blue commented at 2011-06-23 17:37:59 » #783727
Anon4: Oh, yeah, like the other stories were SO groundbreaking.
At least, this Protagonist is taking matters to his OWN Hands!
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Anon4: Oh, yeah, like the other stories were SO groundbreaking.
At least, this Protagonist is taking matters to his OWN Hands!
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Lurkerella commented at 2011-07-17 22:00:16 » #815568
I read it, and mother of fuck the main character is so much of a Gary Stu that makes the other Pokemon character looks complex.
Also the plot is so cliché it's sad...
And the fusions, I blame furries :I
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I read it, and mother of fuck the main character is so much of a Gary Stu that makes the other Pokemon character looks complex.
Also the plot is so cliché it's sad...
And the fusions, I blame furries :I
4 Points Flag
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