Anonymous commented at 2018-10-05 05:03:17 » #2288600

As109 you motherfucker fucked up! Learn how to write plots!

1 Points Flag

Anonymous commented at 2018-11-27 07:01:42 » #2306861

I doubt as109 wrote this text himself. At best this is a fan translation of what was originally written, at worst a fan interpretation of the images. This art is good because it tells a story without using words, some patronizing motherfucker thought that wasn't good enough. Waste of time, reading all that.

5 Points Flag

Anonymous commented at 2018-12-10 21:49:53 » #2312592

"Mail-Order Elf" M.O.E... What you did there, I see it...

13 Points Flag

BoyBuster commented at 2019-01-07 01:29:35 » #2321505

Meh.

ART: 10: Artwork and sequencing of the÷ pictures into one longish video very useful,. As always, quality of asset.art is ×excellent..
T'XT: .01: Text is trite, obvious and not left on the screen long enough to read without pausing. If you want to use this to tap to,good luck with that.
I gave it to a fraction of a point because at least its wr>then by a native speaker of (North American) English.

6 Points Flag

eherogirl commented at 2019-01-24 18:39:25 » #2327531

This was so wonderful and they fucked so rough...On the verge of even killing the little slut a few times...She learned her place, where little ones should know they belong. She became such a perfect, little lover.

9 Points Flag

Anonymous commented at 2019-02-09 20:40:05 » #2334582

I felt like trash in the beginning tbh. But this turned out to be a pretty nice story. I like it ????

14 Points Flag

Anonymous commented at 2019-02-09 21:59:33 » #2334599

Why did that ending make me cry. I need mental help xD

14 Points Flag

ShadowWordPorn commented at 2019-05-23 04:13:47 » #2382537

Regarding the text: I'm the translator, but the original Japanese text is indeed 100% AS109's. If you don't like it, take it up with him I guess! If you think it's hot, glad I could be of service.

30 Points Flag

Anonymous commented at 2019-06-07 18:39:36 » #2390311

i would get a 40 year old elf, then she would be 14 and i wouldnt feel weird about it being a kid because she would have gone through puberty

6 Points Flag

Anonymous commented at 2019-06-21 02:23:14 » #2396699

#2390311 i'd order one that was 14 just to get a test run

7 Points Flag